Damn,the idea is not bad at all,but the on thing this track needs is a huge remastering. Or maybe even better mixing. I think you use too much of reverb.
Anyway I think you're able to do a nice track.You just need to practice
Keep it up !

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Hey man thanks alot for the comment.
I think I still have much to learn about all the elements of music production, mastering my mix would be one of my weakest points so far, but im still learning.
Thanks again!

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You know what i think buddy , I realy like this one, you'r best production so far! The Melody is a killer. I know you'll do better with the Sound quality part next time .

Fabulous!

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Thanks Antonio!
Means alot to me...

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Last edited by DJ-Kreing^^ on Feb-16-2004 at 22:13

Anymore comments?

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Sorry about the late comment mate. Kinda fell asleep before I did it last night.

Well, you already know how much I love that melody. It just so damn nice - could listen to it all day. I think you could have made the tune a bit longer though - it just seemed to fly past for me.

Overall, amazing work - keep it up mate!!

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With a little mastering this could be a master tune.

I'm unsure about the idea around the middle of the song, it just feels different somehow. Except that it's a great tune.
Really like it.

Fundamental - Thanks mate I think ill work on a longer version to it later on, ill add another build up or something.

M1cro5lave - Wow, thanks alot man, glad you liked it.

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While this is a little more epic than I usually like, I still really enjoy this track. The melody in this track is superb and the synth work for the most part is pretty good. However, this track has a very amateur feel to it, mainly stemming from the percussions, kick and bassline IMO, which screams softsynth. Huge potential with this one, work on the percussions (they are too basic sounding 909s, get some dif samples to throw in there), the kick (PM me if you want some good ones), and the bassline (this is harder to really pinpoint, it just has a sorta softsynthy sound to it, try rectifying by filtering it and possible adding another layer, dunno).

Cheers, keep up the good work.

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Thanks alot for the constructive review sean, you really pointed out some issues. Ill try working on the bassline some more, and ill send you a PM about the kick if thats ok
Thanks again!

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i def. like it. take a look at sean's suggestions and work through it, def. work through it because this track is already great, a little bit more, and maybe lengthen it a bit and its good to go. =)

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