hello
its my new track under new nick name heh lol, first one was more chilly this is more trance, i hope you will like it, all feedbacks are very welcome
The hihat sounds a bit on the background, i prefer more upfront hihats tbh.
THat synth at 2.10 sounds nice with the melody.
Break sounds oke, not sure about the pinao, sounds random somtimes but then i like it.
I can't really hear an actuall lead or melody which is a bummer.
I'd also recommand looking at the arrangements maybe some more fx.
Further nice mixing IMO.
Thats all
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Dec-29-2004 21:20
1mason11
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Munich
hi,
great stuff again.like the new kick,also the piano,good chilled athmosphere in the break perhaps the main melo could be stronger or more intensive.but fine work
thx rialto024
Dec-29-2004 23:12
MK-S
uncertain
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Birmingham, UK.
I like it, the kick as mentioned is strong. Your ideas are sound but nothing really 'stands out'. You definitely have good production skills, so keep it up.
Originally posted by Mane
hello
its my new track under new nick name heh lol, first one was more chilly this is more trance, i hope you will like it, all feedbacks are very welcome
The bass drumm is supreme. It is truely thumpen thru my cans!
The hihats are a little soft. I like how you panned it around.
1:10 great rythme!
2:07 another great rythme layer. The pads give this tune awesome emotion.
the pianos are 'OK'
4:10 sweet. I was hoping for a greater creshendo
3:35 sweeter! I now like you hihat work.
6:30 love the break beat! tho it stops suddenly -> weird.
thanx for sharing Lucas.
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Dec-30-2004 00:57
Digital Aura
Project5 Guru
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
...but why is it a sad city?
Bass is definitely solid as mentioned...
The break is nice! Elements tend to get a tad monotonous at times.
I was hoping for a catchy melodic part for that piano... I still don't understand the melody.
They say that if a listener can predetermine how the song is developing it actually is more enjoyable....with this one, I just don't hear a melody and lose interest.
Sorry. Maybe just me.
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Dec-30-2004 05:01
Mane
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Poland, Szczecin
thx a lot for feedbacks, really apreciate, about track am glad you like it at some points i will try do a lot better track next time heh
very nice track! the melody perhaps needs to be tuned a bit more, and just to fix some levels. but there is great potential here and over time im sure u will learn the small details that makes a track more fluent
>at first i wasnt too sure about the subbass, but actually it flows very well with the layers on top
>great job for the percs
>synths layers in the buildup are great, so is the mixing in general.
>kick is really lush
>around 3:10 i expected some more dreamy pads
>main melody is kinda dreamy, i like this.. very relaxing and great atmosphere !
>>> good job, i'm really impressed man.
keep them up
static blue
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Jan-02-2005 19:32
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
nice kick indeed
i think ur missing a main hi hat between the kicks, so itll make the clap sound more clapy
nice pads, melody is ok, kinda ....
keep at it m8,
hear u l8r
, ive made some changes here and there 
enjoy 
...but why is it a sad city?
