I need opinions of what i have so far i started this track 2 days ago and ran into a writers block.Any help would be appreciated thanks.

just replace the xx with tt and copy and paste in ur address bar to hear it.Cuz stupid tripod doesnt allow links and stuff.

hxxp://www.geocities.com/happyfillmore2000/TrackSample.mp3

Last edited by Signal2005 on Jul-09-2005 at 01:17

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*bumpety*

h/o

sounds pretty cool. the cymbal crashes are a bit loud.

sound is a bit empty when it gets going, stick the string on a much higher octave + layer it.

maybe work from the breakdown to get something going + see what happens

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Thanks man advice from you is awsome lol.Like i said im a fan so you know how it is

when it gets going i know its empty but cant put my finger on what it needs.

Maybe a low sub in the background or something to give it that oomph.

its hard using pc speakers to do this but im doing what i can on my end with fruity and stuff.Im a huge fan of break artist's and such for example.

The crystal method Evil Nine etc.Soo thats where the raw sound comes from lol.

thanks again.

Im gonna work on the track some more ill fix the crash cymbal.The kinda strings i was going for are like u ever hear.

The crystal method - Born to slow

that haunting string thats eq on the low end.

but i agree its gotta be layered with a higher octave.

thanks again

I added some more to the track.

I layered some strings and put some deep bass in there as well as a apregiated lead and kinda started after the breakdown not much but just a ruff idea so far. replace the xx with tt and paste in ur address bar.

hxxp://www.geocities.com/happyfillmore2000/TrackSample.mp3

well i couldnt post a direct link cuz geocities wont allow it there screwy like that.