Hey all,

A slight glitch in this track. out of tune lead for about half a minute, but i'm too lazy to fix it right now. I'm just fishing for some feedback. I need a bit of a confidence boost so compliment me a lot please.

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kind regards,

Nick

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Music is as universal to people as breathing. We've probably been at it since before we even started talking. Immaging two cavemen smashing away at a peace of flint to make a spearhead. It wouldn't take long for them to learn te synchronise the sound. And there you have it, the words first percussive band.

Music has survived wars, famines, the plague and many other things and has evolved with man across many cultures. Dance music is just the next step in the evolutionary chain. My guess is that it will probably be with us untill we are extinced.

Last edited by nhibberd on Jan-09-2006 at 04:08

good drive but kick seams a bit too thin and punchy. add a nice deep slower one behind it? bass is nice and original.

first break. reminds me of that typical sound you hear at a weired late night bar.

beat back. i like it now but at 2;24 it goes into melody that i feel isnt nessisary? i liked the sound before, with just that single note. the melody isnt really sophisticated for my liking. i bet all your nice sub melodies work well if you just use that single note throughtout.

maybe do a dub version cos i recon it would make the most of the overal sound you got with this.

nice track

rich

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