hey there! .
nice intro. kick is a bit weak, try to layer kicks.

bassline is cool but its too loud in the mix.
like all the sounds you got going on.

kick is almost inaudible .
that arp sine thing whatever is too loud too and bassline and that are offkey.

i like the break intro, really smooth!

pads are nice!

like your flanger effect.

i was expecting something new after that kick but there was just that arp.

the climax is nice but melody feels weird and some notes are offkey.

like the acid in the background.

youve got alot off nice ideas in this but the melody isnt that good and it lacks melody variation, just the same one going over and over and over 3 times .

ok track .

bassline and arp seems really alike the ones in "neox".

its a bad thing, repeating .

take a break or something, dl some new sounds, try to use new sounds, experiment.

all your tunes is really alike.

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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good