Far too repetitive (and not driving enough) for my tastes. "Because I'm hard" is an interesting title... perhaps you should find another word that meens hard that isnt hard. Sounds like you wrote a song because you have an erection....

Fair enough mate. "Because Im Hard you will not like me but the more you hate me the more you'll understand" is a quote from full metal jacket. Funny enough I neva thought of it as an errection sort of thing, but now you've said it it does sound abit wrong. Sorry you didnt like it mate any suggestions on how to make it more driving. Its only a first version got more editing to do. Thanks for your honesty, anything at all you did like?

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Sorry to say it so simply this time, but it's cheap commercial...

Thanks for the advice (Sarcasm). Like I said Im new to production and im looking for constructive criticism not compairing it to Tiesto or something. I dont know what you call comercial over there but over here this is not even close. Comercial is Dj Samy or Lasgo or somet. What do you think of my other track then? It might me a little more your taste.

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Originally posted by rinski2000 Thanks for the advice (Sarcasm). Like I said Im new to production and im looking for constructive criticism not compairing it to Tiesto or something. I dont know what you call comercial over there but over here this is not even close. Comercial is Dj Samy or Lasgo or somet. What do you think of my other track then? It might me a little more your taste.

I find DJ Sammy (and not Dj Samy) much better, but yeah, you understand what does "cheap commercial" means.
And please no harm taken!! If you share your music, you have to expect BAD feedbacks as well!!!!

'Champion Sound' is terrible, but it has really good parts in it!
for example: from 3:26 till 5:30 I like it
So you are not chanceless, but for now I can't return to you with "oh my God!"-like opinions

Your tune Phat Fucking Bass is not bad at all, but you didn't share it in the forum yet. I clicked on it, but I don't like much Myspace.

I'm not a music producer, so I am unable to give you help with reconstructing your current productions.

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Yeah no worries mate,I am expecting Bad feedback but I like for people to say why its bad. I know I am no way a pro Ive never had and training or even done any music classes or anything so Im tryin to get advice. I just move different size blocks around in Piano role with a mouse to make melodys. I dont have the money to buy equpment or do classes. I know DJ Sammy is much better thasts why he earns millions just sayin that track doesnt class as commercial over here, it might be cheap though yeah. But seriously thanks for checkin out my tracks and thanks for your honesty. Didnt mean to sound rude.

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Last edited by rinski2000 on Mar-11-2007 at 22:32

I thought it was a decent track, however one thing that I think you could improve on was that 'rave lead' (I recognize it from the 3xosc presets in Fruity loops - although you may have used something else). The synth itself is a problem, and I would suggest you tweak the knobs on it -- or just buy yourself a copy of sytrus .

The break was pretty cool, with the full metal jacket quotes in it , and the 'climax' was also good -- however I think you should spend some time creating a main synth.

Lastly, I think your intro could be a little more consistent with the song and come in with an effect and get right into the drumbeat rather than have those progressive type hits taking up the better part of a minute.

Also that 'wind' effect needs a lot of compression and EQ. Or just tune it down.

Thanks so much dude just the advice was looking for. I used Vangard for the main lead, I do understand everything you said and I agree. This was the first mix so now I've got abit of feedback I'll try and go back and fix it up. Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and comment on my track. Cant right now but im gonna check out your site later, sounds interesting. Thanks again mate.

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Also could I ask you for a few words of wisdom on my other track? Champion sound. I think this one is better a little bit more true trance.

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...0&forumid=74&s=

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This is good! The samples fits great! Maybe you could make the kick fater for more driving.

3 people who listen to a lyric and will hear 3 different stories, with the same mood but anyway different, is the sign of a good lyric! Becouse the peoples lifes are different. I love that title!


Takere!

Akia

Thanks Im glad you liked it. Im glad you like the lyric too. I was just searchin through some movie samples and came across that and had an Idea, I like it because its shouting but then starts to flow in rythm. thanks for listeninf to my track. Im not finished onit yet so when I finish my next version I'll repost it.

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