the beginning beat is cool, respect for the effects you brought in, seems hard

the bassline is very weird and cheezy at the same time also sounds balanced to much to the left. The notes look alot like Benni Benassi - Satisfaction

the bell sound isn't bad, but doesn't really fit on the bassline (I ask myself if anything really fits on that bassline)

couldn't listen to the end of it

This would fit great as a soundtrack of a Nintendo Wii game

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Really like the start.

That bass is definately panned too hard left

I quite like some of the drums but overall it is too cheesy for my taste.

Not too keen on the filter sweeps. Did you use a decent filter effect for this. Sounds a bit naff to me. Also, sometimes the filter seems late on opening up full. Were you doing it by hand or drawing it in?

Some nice ideas here but on the whole I don't think it quite comes together.

Thanks for sharing, its good to get people to hear your stuff regardless of how you might feel about the track or peoples reactions to it.

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