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There is a low tone, producing some rather ignominious harmonic dissonance, in the beginning. I would just cut this, outright, as it takes more than it gives to the song.
Bass needs shelving and sounds like it's clipping, quite a bit.
Things tend to get muddy as the song progresses.
I am lovin' the break. I don't particularly like the electronic hi-hat you chose. If you're going to keep it, please consider pulling it back in the mix.
Brilliant ideas but there needs to be a lot of finesse.
For the love of God, kill that volume fluctuation at 5:01! It sounds like the DJ got confused about which song he was working. There is a lot that ought to be done past that point.
The thunder/explosion sound(s), if you're going to keep it, needs a lot of finessing. I don't like it's continued appearance. Once is enough, and it needs finesse'.
All-in-all, a lot of really good ideas, but it needs some major surgery.
I am looking forward to future versions, however.
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