Okay, so. this is great. I like it. Good sound overall, good mixing.

experiment with tempo. how does it make you feel to kick it up 5 or so BPM? or down 2 or 3? experiment and get the tempo to match what the song makes you feel.

A couple things you could do to this to make it more interesting.
After every phrase in the breakdown, insert some kind of percussion fill, to suggest the buildup of energy before everything comes back in for the verse.

also, before the verse comes back in and you have the kick doing the whole quarter note, 8th note, 16th note swell build up, filtersweep the kick to highten the energy.

oh yeah, and you could put some nice crashes on beat one when the verse comes back in.

Hope this helps!!

Levi

I didn't get shivers or chills either but the track has potential. Just listen to what they said. My thoughts exactly...

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It's got the goosebump potential. It could definitely use some development.

A lot of what I'm hearing is a wonderful bed to fit a lead and/or vocal line. Very rich in palatable harmonics and harmonic evolution.

I'm not a huge fan of the Kick Attack Build, in its current inception. I think that could be touched up a bit with some variation leading to the terminal release point.

What you have, so far, is very pretty. I can't wait to hear how it finishes up.

Thank you for your replies. Yeah i understand what u all mean i didnt put much work into the percussive sections yet i was more focused on getting the sound and feeling down first and move on from there.


And I run Ableton Live 7, but i have a vast knowledge of FLStudio cuz i used it for 5 years so yeah i'll collab either.

thanks!

Nightshift:

I use Live too. and I have 7 years experience with FL Studio.
We should collab some time!
I am gonna post a track of mine on here in a bit, check it out!

Levi

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I'm sorry you don't find it fun! Its probably the most fun and speedy DAW i have ever used. there are very minimal steps between inspiration and actually realizing your idea. i tried protools once....definitely not a MIDI friendly environment...gah.