cool sounds like a good idea you have their i think with a bit more time and once you have worked out what to do with it. it will become a good track.

You have to play around a little more on those clap sounds, you are on to something, but you may want to reverb, or delay or something on some of them.

The kick sounds over compressed.

Cool metallic sound in the end there.

Melody works alright i think, those pads works nicely.

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Reall nice track - good melody and arrangement but I find the kick all wrong and I don't think it's a matter of only too much compression. I would layer another fatter kick in there and pull the compressed sounding kick right down just to have it add some click.

Thanks for the feedback. The kick indeed has some compression on it, but I think the source sound isn't that good, although I liked the clicky thing it had in it. Glad the melodies are working out!

Thanks everyone!

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gotta love that saw lead melody , maybe add a phaser to it

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