You posted the delete link :P

Changed the link sorry about that.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/hrvkv8

I'd take the one sample out where it sounds as if some drum sticks are hitting on pans. It disturbs the (good) rhythm, if you ask me.

Without it I think it is more trancy. I like the build-up.

I really like this track man, the start is brilliant, i couldnt praise the intro any more really!


Love tha arpy sound, it has an eerie sound to it and thats something i always like in a track, but the progressions straight through keep you well involved in the track, Love the break, those string synths you have used are spot on mate, keeps the emotion really well, but also takes the track in a different way for that moment.

Overall ive gotta say i really like it, and im going to play it again now haha!

It actually reminds me in terms of the way you have your percussion lined up of the new WILL I AM / CHERYL COLE tune, don't know if thats just me, but the start reminds me of it! Keep it up mate and keep posting your samples on here because i would love to check soem more of your tunes out

Thanks guys for the feedback !

giggsy77 -will take that out, wasn't quite sure about that sound Thanks for checking out my track, much appreciated.

Craigb1- thanks for the cool comment man. Really appreciate it. Glad you liked it! Will have to check that Cole tune out to see what you mean. I will definitely let you know when I post something new on here, please let me know when you do as well. Your shit is really cool from what I heard today.

Anyways, onward to the next tune. Need some fresh sounds in my head.. hehe..and a beer

Cheers,

Stiggy

You're welcome, was a nice listen! You'll have to repost the edited track of course, otherwise we won't know for sure if it got even better

Definitely taking that sound out All I think about are pots and pans now..hehe...
Think I'm gonna call it that..pots and pans..haha

Pretty cool track man, listen'd a few times now.

The progression is nice, as well very mellow melodies, something I'd definitely enjoy! Kinda reminds me of a minimalish anjunadeep style too

keep it up

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haha pots and pans, great name for a track! If im to be honest, that sound didnt really disturb nothing for me, in fact i quite liked you adding that sound in as it changed the track in those moments it was added, but if you feel yourself as though it doesnt belong in the track, then it could be worthwhile to take out?

Thanks Mike for the cool comments. Thanks for listening and look forward to hearing more of your great tunes.

craigb I named it pots and pans..hahaha...love that shit. Yeah i left the sound in there didn't change much of the tune. Added another synth on top of the bass and did some more automation. But think I'm just gonna let this one be and move on. Try and make the next one better. Trying not to get stuck on a tune for too long these days. Used to always do that and never ended up finishing anything..hehe

Anyways not sure if you will noticed the new synth line but its filtering up and down with the bass.

I think when the kick comes in that synth (which i like a lot) might do better more dry. the open hi hat keeps your attention long enough for the transitions to start happening and the other perc to come in which is nice. synths are totally on target, nice open hi end. it's pretty good as it is, but i the mix needs to stand out more imho.