Nice well balanced track, awesome energy pads, all the elements fit well together - but that main melody needs some work, it's way too basic. You've got a track named "Tainan" with an oriental-vibed plucked lead so given that theme the melody really needs to be something special. Play around with the structure/complexity of it, perhaps add some delay to breathe some life into it - make it more memorable

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Nice track overall. I like how you filtered the drums before and on the breakdowns.

--Peace

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I pretty much agree with Novastorm.
The breakdown needs that plucky synth to really stand out.Maybe add a fair bit of short attack delay to mix it up a little.
And as said,with a name like that, the breakdown needs to be pretty epic.
Good tune overall tho.

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where do you download / buy the pads for the background melody?
I'm glad to know the name of pads you're using..

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