Hi guys!,, well just posting a sketch of my first track, I have been working with this idea, I would like to have some feedback if possible. Let me know if you like it, you dont, o whatever you think!

cheers!

http://soundcloud.com/mise/oceanwalk-1

anyone?..

This is actually kind of a chill, groovy, housey tune. Drums could come up a little louder - especially the kick.

The shift in ambient tone, of the percussion loop, gets a little old. I wasn't fond of it to begin with but it seemed to compliment the bass-line for a while. After that, however, it got a little old.

Some of the other instruments coming in were a little simplistic but, really, if this is your first tune, you're not off to a bad start.

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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012