🚫 TA EDIT: SC embed is no longer valid Sander van Doorn - Daisy (Johann Stones Crazy Daisy Remix) Final version by Johann Stone
think this has what it takes?
update new version new kick new synth etc
update final version lot of things changed and a link to my version in the comp http://www.talenthouse.com/creativeinvites/preview/a52127fc01eb65d24e3d7fb36bc3174d/172 support if you think its worthy

Last edited by Johann Stone on Mar-10-2011 at 23:35

I love SVD.

Ok I like the basic idea but you asked if it has what it takes, and I want to give my honest answer.

It lacks subblety imo. What I get from SVD tracks is a sense of space and equisite attention to detail.

Your track has the fondations but could use some weeks of very close surgical attention to every single sound. It sounds a bit 'wall of loop' in the main parts of the intro and elsewhere.

If it were me I'd spend a lot of time making sure any loop I introduced only stayed if it really did suit the track and still let it breathe. Maybe there are no loops here, but the percs do sound a bit loopy layered.

The synth in the break is perfect.

The synth that comes in the drop is not exquisite enough - like it was a just a slightly tweaked preset and I personaly dont think SVD would think this had enough care as he is a master of sound choice.

The kick is also for me not good enough - a bit boxy vengeancy. Start over with a new kick imo and build from there.

HARSH OF ME > but I want you to do well, so get to it!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I love SVD. Ok I like the basic idea but you asked if it has what it takes, and I want to give my honest answer. It lacks subblety imo. What I get from SVD tracks is a sense of space and equisite attention to detail. Your track has the fondations but could use some weeks of very close surgical attention to every single sound. It sounds a bit 'wall of loop' in the main parts of the intro and elsewhere. If it were me I'd spend a lot of time making sure any loop I introduced only stayed if it really did suit the track and still let it breathe. Maybe there are no loops here, but the percs do sound a bit loopy layered. The synth in the break is perfect. The synth that comes in the drop is not exquisite enough - like it was a just a slightly tweaked preset and I personaly dont think SVD would think this had enough care as he is a master of sound choice. The kick is also for me not good enough - a bit boxy vengeancy. Start over with a new kick imo and build from there. HARSH OF ME > but I want you to do well, so get to it!

awesome! thanks again man

Too busy. I find the sound to be harsh, borderline painful to listen too.

UPDATE!!!!!!

*the dissonance is kinda messing with me. the percs and stuff are good but the square bass synth doesn't really work imho. has potential but, not sure. i'm a bit torn as what to think.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Jan-29-2011 at 10:21

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Originally posted by Evolve140 *the dissonance is kinda messing with me. the percs and stuff are good but the square bass synth doesn't really work imho. has potential but, not sure. i'm a bit torn as what to think.

thanks alot

quite busy and it sounds like the LOUDNESS BUTTON is on on your car stereo (that's not good)
I hear good riffs, but i miss cohesion

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It's a lot better now.

I really dig the leaness here. The percs and swooshes up and real good. The sustained white noise is too high nand shrill - by all means start loudish (but not so piercing but then fade a bit or it will be too much in a club.

The lead is about spot on, good work.

The bass is nice, but again I think you can get it nicer, tee hee.

Overall good work.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler It's a lot better now. I really dig the leaness here. The percs and swooshes up and real good. The sustained white noise is too high nand shrill - by all means start loudish (but not so piercing but then fade a bit or it will be too much in a club. The lead is about spot on, good work. The bass is nice, but again I think you can get it nicer, tee hee. Overall good work.

hahaha yes yes yes you are a saint man

Decent work.

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Originally posted by Desiderata Decent work.

thanks