http://www.internetdj.com/song/84278

Brand New Mastered Track - remixed into a more uplifting tune

Hope you like

DJ Bobby T

Last edited by boblivesinaston on Jun-16-2011 at 21:30

you've already made two other threads featuring both of these tracks. update and bump up the old ones, don't make new ones. next time it's a suspension

http://www.internetdj.com/song/81139

Transilience - completed version

Enjoy
DJ Bobby T

it's obvious you have some musical skill but the production is ear jarring and not professional sounding AT all. though i can hear the concepts, you just need a few (self taught, online, forums? what anyone else does..) fine lessons in the art of production.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 it's obvious you have some musical skill but the production is ear jarring and not professional sounding AT all. though i can hear the concepts, you just need a few (self taught, online, forums? what anyone else does..) fine lessons in the art of production.

cheers Bro, i'll get myself online and try pick up a few tips!

there's a plethora (a myriad maybe, can seem daunting) of resources available, but as long as you are learning something and progressing in any way that's good. if you can settle on one aspect of production to focus on for a while and develop that, it will help incubate the other premises and gradually while keeping in practice what you have learned you'll just get better. Good luck, come back here if you need feedback / have questions. and again there is noticeable musicality so keep up the effort man!

I agree with the above comments. Production value isn't very good but everyone starts off small. The notes, melodies, chords, etc aren't bad, so you definitely have the ability to go far. Like Evolve said, the best way I believe to go about it is focus on one aspect of producing and the rest will come. Some people focus on getting the drums perfect, and in time doing that everything else will start to resolve as well. For myself personally, I'm always more interested in learning synthesis and how to make new cool sounds, and pride myself on what I can synthesize. Everything else in my tracks started to take shape because of that. And plus, learning new stuff opens up so many avenues and helps so much with song writing! Practically everytime I learn something really cool I end up putting it down in Ableton, and then end up writing a full track, so it can be very inspirational to learn new things. There's tons of great sites out there for tutorials on dance music, so I'd say get out there and learn tons of ways to introduce new aspects into your music. Your arrangement isn't that bad either, but I don't really like the synths or drums used.

Know this; for drums, regardless of how much processing you do to them, a shit sample is a shit sample. You put a crappy sample in, its going to never be 'amazing' when the track is finished. You should try looking around for better drum samples. If I may suggest, soundstosample.com has tons of sample packs from the best sample producers in the business and I highly suggest checking out Hy2rogen & Sample Magic's stuff, it really can transform your sound!
Good luck!

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