Really digging the intro, great melodic stuff happening, sounds a bit heavy on the bass, but can't judge the mix too much here. The climax sounds like a completely different track, I don't like it, but this is personal taste, maybe Seandroid can help you more with this.
Aug-29-2012 11:26
Richard Butler
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
Great intro up to 50 secs - that's one moody passage and really for me the basis of a terrific track. The rest didn't really make any impression but that maybe because this style of vowel filter electro for me personally is a little jaded unless perfectly executed and original.
That passage after the 50 second mark is like some progressive house shoe horned in and for me does not relate to the superb intro.
If you don't take that intro anywhere, send in my way will ya!
Originally posted by dj_alfi
change your avatar for fucks sake.
Aug-29-2012 14:38
Trancelover03591
Trained tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
The drop at 3:05 is pretty awesome. The prog lead that starts at :56 is also really pretty, but I think there is too much reverb. I think this song could be huge. You have some of the best productions on TA in my opinion.
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Originally posted by Trancelover03591
The drop at 3:05 is pretty awesome. The prog lead that starts at :56 is also really pretty, but I think there is too much reverb. I think this song could be huge. You have some of the best productions on TA in my opinion.
Thanks man I appreciate that. Ill be trying out soem other ideas a keep you guys posted. Thanks for all the feedback!
Truth and only truth (as I know your style for last few years so I can already speak truth with you, I hope lol) - first the intro (up till around 50 sec part) was really nice and cool, I was impress with the type of sound and arrangement you ware able to get/create in this part but the rest, hmm ....... is not clicking with me yet (at least in this stage of your production), looks like you missing (at least for me) some bonding element which will glue the whole thing together like some melodic but aggressive pluck/lead, some crazy but tonal pad supported by sawchain sound with sidechaine FX or this already build bass line need to be massage/tweak more into this basic sub-melodic composition.
Hopefully you understand what I'm aiming for man in my short and quick review but you definitely don't have agree with me just simply ignore it.
This has lots of potential if you direct this WIP right way lol - all the best man.
Darek
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Truth and only truth (as I know your style for last few years so I can already speak truth with you, I hope lol) - first the intro (up till around 50 sec part) was really nice and cool, I was impress with the type of sound and arrangement you ware able to get/create in this part but the rest, hmm ....... is not clicking with me yet (at least in this stage of your production), looks like you missing (at least for me) some bonding element which will glue the whole thing together like some melodic but aggressive pluck/lead, some crazy but tonal pad supported by sawchain sound with sidechaine FX or this already build bass line need to be massage/tweak more into this basic sub-melodic composition.
Hopefully you understand what I'm aiming for man in my short and quick review but you definitely don't have agree with me just simply ignore it.
This has lots of potential if you direct this WIP right way lol - all the best man.
Darek
Thanks darek, you basically summarized what I was thinking too. I'll get back to this later, I've been on this and another track for 2 days now. My mind is much mush
Originally posted by sako487
Thanks darek, you basically summarized what I was thinking too. I'll get back to this later, I've been on this and another track for 2 days now. My mind is much mush
Get a beer or a drink, play some playstation game and enjoy two days of a break - works for me lol (if my wife let me play lol)
Cheers,
Darek
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