http://soundcloud.com/miikkaleinonen/zen-moon-preview

I remade the whole track more melodic but still got the same problem, how to finish this track?

I havent been producing for a year now so any kind of feedback is welcome, about sounds etc.. Thanks!


zen&moon preview by miikkaleinonen

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Last edited by shpanda on Nov-02-2012 at 15:12

My thoughts are to make a bridge where it ends, and you can even use piece of the fade off the track like you have it to work with the transition; then bring it back to where it was. I really like the chords.

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Originally posted by MSZ My thoughts are to make a bridge where it ends, and you can even use piece of the fade off the track like you have it to work with the transition; then bring it back to where it was. I really like the chords.

Thanks, great tips! Its so hard when you dont have idea what to do with a beginning of the track.

Did you like the sounds? Not sure about the offbeat bass and the chords pluck, especially when the pluck filter is opening up, does it sound too harsh? Its massive preset from temple one soundset, maybe i should replace it with self made sylenth patch, sylenth can sound much more softer imo in these kind of sounds.

Or maybe im overthinking it, should just finish the track lol

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Last edited by shpanda on Nov-02-2012 at 19:08

Sounds ok here when everything is going. I think you can afford to turn down the kick a tiny bit, which will result in everything else breathing a little more, but do whatever you want, just finish it :}

Agree, cleaver and interesting chord progression man, like where you going with this so far.

Cheers,

Darek

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I like this. But it needs to be quicker into that last 3rd and you need a nice paddy breakdown . Good luck!

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Originally posted by adi_hanson I like this. But it needs to be quicker into that last 3rd and you need a nice paddy breakdown . Good luck!

Thanks! How do you mean it should be quicker? Intro too long or?

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I think personally that intro is too long and it shouldn't need more than a minute to build to that last 60 seconds of the track. And then a nice big breakdown and build up!

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Originally posted by adi_hanson I think personally that intro is too long and it shouldn't need more than a minute to build to that last 60 seconds of the track. And then a nice big breakdown and build up!

Wtf man.. Theres no way i can push the main part to a 60 second mark.. this is no radio edit, why should i?

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Ok 2 minutes :-D

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I like this. sounds clean. This shouldnt be too hard to finish!