good work mate so far,

however it still needs percussion to the tune in my opinion, especially in the breaks, to make more exciting,

keep it up,

Peter

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the percussion is weak.. but the rest sounds a o k

the kick in could be way more dramatic it like ive said before.. it needs to build up to something greater..t ry some wooshing effects after the kick in or some hi strings. cool effects ont he percussion


keep up the good work.. like to hear version 2

yea i agree with mycon the perc thing. really like the pads... you are a greate producer but you need some work music wise... loved the pads... and i know it isnt finished yet so im waiting to hear it finished...

hey i enjoy it!!
its not bad!
do u think u can give me some pointers?
im thinking about producing a lil.
just a track or two to get me going.
but what programs are out there?

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Mycron .. Thanx and i'm working on the perc now

Nrg2Nfinit .. Thanx for listening and i'm working on it now and i've changed to lead and added some drive to da tune

dj jasonF .. Thanx for listening and thax alot of ur nice words

kev-o .. Thanx for listening and i use FL Studio which is very nice one and you can use reason which i don't like !
btw if you wanna ask about anything just pm me

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The bassline sounds too spreaded. Do you have stereo seperation on it ? You should definitely center it.
The percussion sounds very empty and it doesn't push through.
keep it up ;-)

now i've tweaked da perc .. changed da lead ..

about da bass line .. i see it is centered!

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Hye,
Listening ... I like a lot the synths in the intro man!!, but they sound a bit plane and flat imo , mmm the Phaser/Flanger thing sounds a bit high, drums, I would work a bit more on them, they are a bit basic, just kick, clap, open hat, sounds abit weak as someone else mentioned before, other than that is going excellent man!!, all sounds damn clean, I am looking for the finished version .
Kopi =o.

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Thanx for listening dude

and i've finished the remix and reworked the drums and the main lead

i'm contacting vandit about it now if nothing happens it will be posted here (btw i'll be posting a demo of the final).

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thats nice dude let us know what happened... keep it up!

sure .. thx

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