Hi,

Im glad to show you 2 tracks which im currently working on. Remix of Matt Darey tune is on early stage, but just wanna know your opinions.

Im noob, so constructive criticism is higlhy appreciated

Damian Prus - Tune Up

Matt Darey - Nocturnal Delight [Damian Prus Remix]

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too bad to comment?

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Hey Damian!

The remix is still a bit too early to really give feedback on I think... Got a nice crunchy bassline going though! Lead sounds ok, perhaps a little bit too loud.

Your own tune sounds a little 'random' I think, it needs a more laid out structure. Bassline and kick could perhaps be a bit less loud, try some compression to keep the drive. Synth sounds ok by itself (although also quite loud in the mix), but the melody also feels quite 'random'... Not my cup of tea for now.

Good luck with both of them

// Wim

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Thanks Wim, Your comments are always welcome.

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Yeah, thanks guys :/

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