i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy.

what it needs IMO:

a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears

a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole.

synergy

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Originally posted by jacheatamobits i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy. what it needs IMO: a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole. synergy

I thought I was having form problems, I just needed someone to tell me. Thanks alot. I love you.

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I really liked the patch for the riff though..

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quote:

Originally posted by jacheatamobits i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy. what it needs IMO: a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole. synergy

I totally agree with synergy, it needs alot work. The lead synth isn't really a pleasure to hear. Too less percussion and the percussion you have, I hardly noticed it. It's clipping a bit too but it could just be my mediaplayer. But all and all, the idea is nice... And thnxz for reviewing my tune

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Hmm, i see. Thank you for commenting.

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