Went to starbucks again tonight and couldn't write anything on my own, no melodies or progressions were hitting me, so I decided to try my hand at an idea i'd had since....well since this afternoon. Paulson's a fairly little-known (I think) rock band whom I absolutely adore, so I sincerely hope I did this song justice.

Anyways, I still got a few minor things to work out but for only starting this about 4 hours ago, its coming along ridiculously fast so I thought I'd get some feedback.

Thanks in advance



edit: more work done on it, close to finishing if not finished (if i get lazy)

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Last edited by mezzir on Sep-29-2007 at 04:16

Lots of potential here...

About midway through, I hear a lot of percussion overlaid with the vocals, which I don't think works very well. I'd just use the vocals there, if possible.

Maybe add a few more effects to that synth I hear after the vocals, I'm thinking specifically of more reverb or a delay or something.

And, needless to say, it could do with a real intro and outro. But considering how quickly you put this together, I have to say:

lol ok, sorry i just have to post this tho:

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Originally posted by mezzir Went to starbucks again tonight and couldn't write anything on my own, no melodies or progressions were hitting me, so I decided to try my hand at an idea i'd had since....well since this afternoon. Paulson's a fairly little-known (I think) rock band whom I absolutely adore, so I sincerely hope I did this song justice. Anyways, I still got a few minor things to work out but for only starting this about 4 hours ago, its coming along ridiculously fast so I thought I'd get some feedback. Thanks in advance

As a percussionist, I really like the rhythm you got going here. I never actually heard this song before, but it seems pretty good. You wouldn't have happened to used Vanguard VST for some of this song, did you?

BTW, I'm just curious how you got hold of the acappella of this song? Do you just write to the record company?

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Originally posted by phantom limb As a percussionist, I really like the rhythm you got going here. I never actually heard this song before, but it seems pretty good. You wouldn't have happened to used Vanguard VST for some of this song, did you? BTW, I'm just curious how you got hold of the acappella of this song? Do you just write to the record company?

hah yeah, vanguard

and i don't have the acapella Just eq'ed out the bass/some of the drums. whats left is the vocals, some guitars, and the rhythm

poor man's solution :/

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Quality stuff Very pleasant to hear it, captured my ears, for sure =)

I think that if you take off the snares would make it sound better...

Cheers,

- Tinto

this song is incredible dude. keep that shit up!

updated version!

(bump)

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Wooha! Awesome track girl! Really nice!! I like it alot!
Not much to say other then keep up the good work!

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