I love everything I hear until 02:50 in the track, such a beautiful atomsphere and I'm getting som serious progreissve-trance vibes. But after 02:50 I personally feel that it the magic intro didn't really build into anything concrete. The kick is quite weak and doesn't really push through the mix, the hats and percs are fine, but doesn't add much to a groove and the bass doesn't really have any room to add a drive, and is kind of flat to be honest. I see good potential in this track, based on the first 02:50 minutes of it! But I think it could be alot stronger! I dig your vision, so I hope this doesn't come across as 'hate' or anything, I'm just being honest with my opinion! I personally anticpitaed a dark change from 02:50 in to some gritty bass, punchy kick, intresting rhytmes of percs peeking through, and all the previous sound have been mostly shut off, to be re-introduced! I I really like all sequences you made in the first part! Love that atmosphere!

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David Laine / Castra / Semantica
Magic Island / Armada / Perceptive
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