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looking for constructive feedback on a track i'm working on:
Angels Beyond Voyage (tbc mix)

cheers
nm

also, i never got around to posting these tracks, so if you have a good ear (or a bad one i guess), gimme some criticism!
Disaster is Pulse (original mix)
Meadow (not a dream mix)
Bleu Azul (original mix)

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not keen on meadow but the other 3 tracks are pretty cool.. nice old skool circa Magik 1-2 feel to them..

i would say to look for a release nowdays you need to perhaps make them a little more hard edged and beef them up a bit, but other than that they are pretty kool m8

good work!!

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thanks for the feedback ..

meadow was a venture into chilled-out progressive and i liked it enough to polish it a little. not quite the right style though.

i agree i need to fill my songs out a bit and probably add some harder edge, i just dont know how to them out really without making them sound too crowded. and for harder edge, i just dont like the harder edge stuff that i try to make, i'm not good at that.

i agree to each his own about original tracks vs remixes. i dont really check out too many remixes here either but mainly because i cant learn much from em. i'm working on some crossover remixes though (just using vocals from pop songs). do those count ?

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angel beyond voyage:

sounds pretty old-school yeah. i think you need a kick with alot more punch. some of the synths are a bit loud, and they all seem very filtered and abit high on mid frequencies.
if you want to fill your tracks out more, try being more subtle in the use of synths, and use some eq on them so they don't interfere too much with eachother

disaster is a pulse:

this one has a clearer kick, sounds better. i like the synths more in this one. you need to work on the volumes here, the main lead is overpowering everything else. again, use eq.

i see you have some nice ideas, just keep practicing, and your stuff will sound great soon

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thanks for the help haak. i'm going back to the lab again armed with some good info

cheers
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