I think you did a great job on this one, although I don't really like it

Production wise it's very good. Nice and smooth but not too smooth. The vocals are good too eventhough I don't like her voice, it's pretty standard to me. Overall a good track. Good mastering. Got nothing negative to comment on the song itself

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Nice track, the vocals are mint

The actual tune itself wasn't really what the vocals needed, maybe omething more engaging bassline/percussion wise. but thats just me :P

Great track anyway.
I'd love to do a remix tho, what do U say ?

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Originally posted by Bren-F Nice track, the vocals are mint The actual tune itself wasn't really what the vocals needed, maybe omething more engaging bassline/percussion wise. but thats just me :P Great track anyway. I'd love to do a remix tho, what do U say ?

Glad you liked it.Will let you know if i need a remix

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Very uplifting, and for the most part very professional sounding. i think the synth would be more enjoyable if it wasnt solid 8th notes the whole time, you know? but, with that in mind this is a extremely good piece. I'm not a big vocal trance fan, but i think this is an amazing song. there is one part of the bass around 2:30 that doesnt sound right. the chord clashes. i would also LOVE to remix this track. good job man.

-NIC-

good job well done mate, although i think it would benefit from another mixdown cos the vocal is quite muddy.

nice to see somebody else writing their own stuff on here.. respect

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Originally posted by modular good job well done mate, although i think it would benefit from another mixdown cos the vocal is quite muddy. nice to see somebody else writing their own stuff on here.. respect

Thanks modular,..it's nice to know that some people appreciate original work.
It's all to easy to remix imo.I think being original is what get's you noticed.
Your right about the vocal,i've sorted that out now,just hav'nt had time to upload.Got a bit carryed away with the plugin's,eq's and mastering..
Will check out some of your work soon..

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Remastered version now uploaded...

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if ya wanna remix done let me know!!! im free for remixing

check out my new work see what u think then ;let me know


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