This sounds quite ameture, not that that's a bad thing starsurfer, if there's no room for improvement then what fun would it be? I think the track's concept, layout, and layers are very good. Obviously what needs working on here is your sound, it doesn't seem as though much effort was put in, in attention to detail of your synths and your beats... refinement is what this needs. Are you going to spend more time on it?
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May-06-2003 07:51
starsurfer
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2002
Location: Sydney Australia
thanks for the feedback dude. Its my best effort so far.. and least amatuerish of them all.. so I am glad you have not heard my older songs hehe.
yes, the synths need work. What would your suggestions be?
Main synth? what about the drums?
please, be specific, and I am sure I can make the necessary changes.
I am working in Reason 2.. and I only have a midi keyboard.. nothing else .. hehe.. so, my sound is representative of my equipment also.... but no excuses, I am still learning.. and you are right... the fact that there is room for improvement is a good thing!
Starsurfer (Pendulum)
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May-06-2003 10:22
bragi
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Sydney, Australia
Hmmm... I tried to download the song, but I can't seem to do a DNS lookup on the site
Will try more fiddling. Anyone else having trouble getting to the link?
Yeah sorry guys. I picked a bad time to upload a song to my web server. Having the DNS settings and hosting all switched over.. . should be done by tomorrow night. I will give you a new URL when it is up!
A Song I made, feedback welcome!
