hey guys and gals, I'm pretty new to producing and I think I'm doing pretty good so far but I'm not so good with melodies. I was wondering if people here would take a listen to my song I just started. It's basically just the begining, but I would like to get some feedback on the little melody bit that comes in at about 1:24 or so, before I continue. Comments on any of it please. Thanx

oh here's the link THE LINK

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This is structurally good as is production.

The bassline could in my opinion be made fatter, try adjusting the EQ on it.

The melody is nice, but I think that style of melody could do with a delay with a longer feedback.

Overall it's a nice track which definitely has potential.

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Originally posted by S2K This is structurally good as is production. The bassline could in my opinion be made fatter, try adjusting the EQ on it. The melody is nice, but I think that style of melody could do with a delay with a longer feedback. Overall it's a nice track which definitely has potential.

Cool thanx alot. What part of the bassline do you suggest that I eq, e.g. midrange, lows, ect..., I'll try your suggestions thanx alot.

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i agree with s2k
this track has potential

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Originally posted by John i agree with s2k this track has potential

Thank you, I will keep working on it then.

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quite nice!, as previously posted the bassline needs to be phattened up, the synth needs some delay, that would make it sound 100% better!.

the tune has heaps of potential
btw, may i ask what are you using to produce ?

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Originally posted by dj dave b quite nice!, as previously posted the bassline needs to be phattened up, the synth needs some delay, that would make it sound 100% better!. the tune has heaps of potential btw, may i ask what are you using to produce ?

atm I am using Reason mostly and running it through cubase vst/32, I also use a korg ms2000r and an emu audity 2000. Mostly Reason though actually this song is just Reason and Cubase all the sound sources coming from Reason.

Yeah I'll have to work on that bass line a little more, and the delay is coming, I'll post the song again when it's finished, but please any suggestions will help it be a better song. Thanx

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yeah, i would say fatten up the bass. nice pads man, they sound kinda old school! Over all though, i think the track sounds kinda cheesy. Deffinitely give that synth some delay. nice overall.

Hey, not too bad! I'm rather impressed, but the tune could do with an overall beefing-up...but excellent job! Keep at it!

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