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interesting. really mellowed out harmony/melody, thats cool. those stringy/pad things you have goin are pretty cool, i think...but i can hardly hear your percussion, and that synth stab you keep looping through a lot of it is a little loud, and gets annoying pretty fast. a lot of these synths could be tweaked. you should just experiment with more effects n stuff. 3:20 is also way too short if you want it to be a dance track. 
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