the kick is kinda empty, maybe a reverb will do the trick.
on the other hand, the clap thingy is overreverbed...

there's some sturdy flow of the chill out groove which is great

i dont really like the bass, have you thought of changing its wave from saw to pulsewidth or square?

the first sound to come after the break is really sweet & beautiful

and the combo of the piano with the guitar is awesome (did they use it in the original?)

good work overall, just please do something about the bass


alon

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this is an awesome chillin' tune...I really like it, it is like a mixture of robert miles and planisphere ...

perhaps you should add some silent fx noises and some little additional tracks ( silent arpeggiator in the background ) to make it sound more full and professional...



Trancevision

good prog take on the org.

build up takes a while, but u were prob. going for that

very good variation on the original

it;'s good to see that there are original idea out there - rather than whole barrage of trance remixes of a trance tune.

maybe my only negative comment would be the overall sound when it comes to the melody section is a little thin.
I'm going to listen again later - and i might write something else - don't give up - you have vision, which IMO is most important

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Thanks for the reviews

Will work a bit more on it, I agree it needs some more elements in order to be professional


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