Not to bad, it sounds very simple though. Maybee effects and certainly alot more elements to "Fill the track up".

That little cat sounds is kind of annoying but hey that may just be me. More percussion is needed, and im not a fan of that bass drum, it sound's thin and pissy (this aint a negative thing, well kind of is, but in a nice way).

Positives though, the track has a nice alround structure, so keep it up and things will improve !

Take Care

Hope it helped a little, you may take notice of this and add things and change things

Thanks for the your tips and help, burns

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