wow, you already got a track with one week of fruity? you're fast!

EDIT : well, you've got a good idea there i think for a very moody and deep track. though i'm missing a bassline (i don't think there is one?) and i don't like that kick... you should try a good sample instead of the basic fruity kick i think
the lead that starts at about 2:00 mins isn't 100% in key with the other loop i think. maybe a bassline will fix things staying into key.

keep on experimenting i'd say

cheers,
LW

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Last edited by Icone on Jun-16-2003 at 08:55

Tempo: 133,000 BPM?

I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast.

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Originally posted by Lightworks wow, you already got a track with one week of fruity? you're fast! EDIT : well, you've got a good idea there i think for a very moody and deep track. though i'm missing a bassline (i don't think there is one?) and i don't like that kick... you should try a good sample instead of the basic fruity kick i think the lead that starts at about 2:00 mins isn't 100% in key with the other loop i think. maybe a bassline will fix things staying into key. keep on experimenting i'd say cheers, LW

Hi Lightworks!!
Thanx for this nice feedback! well, you have the true, I was having problems doing a good bassline for the track because I dont have a full-dominate of fruity yet.. DO U GUYS KNOW WHICH PLUG-IN GENERATOR IS BETTER TO MAKE GOOD BASSLINES?? about the kick... mmm I dont see any probelms here but hey, I respect all the opinions!!
Cheers, Costa.

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OceanLab - Satellite (Costa del Sol Remix)
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Originally posted by Wretched Tempo: 133,000 BPM? I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast.

Tryin' to be smart here, huh?

In many countries comma is used to separate decimals, like here in this case.

133,000000000000000000000000000 BPM is just a more accurate way of saying 133 BPM

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Originally posted by Wretched Tempo: 133,000 BPM? I think you mean 133 BPM. 133,000 would be .. a little fast.

hahahahaha yeah! 133,000 is a little fast for you, but for me this means only 133 BPM
Like deejay_naku said in many countries the comma is used to separate decimals!! Ok, thats not important tho!! I need comments about the track

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Costa del Sol - Cala Blanca
Mark Otten - Tranquility (Costa del Sol Remix)
OceanLab - Satellite (Costa del Sol Remix)
Fire & Ice - Para Siempre (Costa's goes to Menorca Remix)

For a first track with F'loops this is pretty damn good.
The the perc is very nice, sorta reminds me of the Gabriel & Dresen Remix of Andain - Summer Calling
However, it badly needs a bass line, preferably a really deep acoustic sound bass or sub bass.
Also I dont like the melody...sorry. Strings playing the chords with some sort ofplucked stlye synth playing a deep melody would suit the track more then the one U have used.
Keep at it tho, I expect a total stormer next time

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Hey man,

First track with friuty.. well done.. i opend fruity once and was like.. wtf.. i'll stick with reason

not to bad. I agree with Bren-F though.. needs a bassline.. maybe something like this..

k---k---k---k
--bb--b---bb--b--

i really short stab bass.. not 2 sure but definatly needs something.

i like the main melody but some not pregerssions just didn't ring right in my ear.. also.. with the instrument.. try adding a couple of voices (if you can.. don't know friuty) and play with some reverb.. reverb can really brighten up a sound.. especialy on cords/pads

one thing in it i do like though is how your structured the hats.. very melow.. i likes...

not my style.. but.. for first time in frity i give 10/10.. in the scense of a track.. 7/10.. keep @ it though..!!

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Originally posted by Bren-F For a first track with F'loops this is pretty damn good. The the perc is very nice, sorta reminds me of the Gabriel & Dresen Remix of Andain - Summer Calling However, it badly needs a bass line, preferably a really deep acoustic sound bass or sub bass. Also I dont like the melody...sorry. Strings playing the chords with some sort ofplucked stlye synth playing a deep melody would suit the track more then the one U have used. Keep at it tho, I expect a total stormer next time

Hey Bren, wazzup!
Yeah, Im totally agrre with you, this needs a better bassline, but I dont know which plugin generator is better to make great BL?
Glad u expect for me a total stormer next time.. hahah
C yaa , Costa.

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Costa's Traxx to Come

Costa del Sol - Cala Blanca
Mark Otten - Tranquility (Costa del Sol Remix)
OceanLab - Satellite (Costa del Sol Remix)
Fire & Ice - Para Siempre (Costa's goes to Menorca Remix)

wow, this is quite impressive for a first track. these sounds are all pretty standard, you need to work on sampling/synthesizing, but your sense of rhythm and timing is quite amazing for a first-timer. don't stop producing anytime soon, that's for sure

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hey mate! wow, niiice comments here! Thanx!
Also, somnium, its not my first-track ever, just my first track with fruity! Before I was working with Music 2000

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Costa del Sol - Cala Blanca
Mark Otten - Tranquility (Costa del Sol Remix)
OceanLab - Satellite (Costa del Sol Remix)
Fire & Ice - Para Siempre (Costa's goes to Menorca Remix)