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I like the bassline and the percussion (some of it) but that's about it. As haak said that hithat is waay too loud, and the entire track has a very odd sound to it, very squashed, can't really hear any dynamics. You definitely need to work on the stereo seperation, once the entire thing is rolling it all sounds mushed and overlapped. I'm not fond of the crazy reverb on the main lead, this is basically what is causing so much aureal confusion.
I agree with haaks other comments as well, the bassline is out of key and does not follow the chord progression of the melody, I also dislike that pitch up thing you did at the end of the break.
I'm sorry that I don't have anything really positive to say, all I can say is keep working on it.
P.S. Did you master this in ozone or t-racks?
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hehe a bit loud...i like the startup automation how everything fades into a nice transmission. i like how the kick and bass is "squarey" and deep it has a seperated feel from the high and low grounds of your track. The main syth is great, it sounds like the original in a way or it is lol. the little synth fills are great and when the track starts to build up again i think that break is absolutely amazing 
. When the track breaks in i think it sounds flat personally compared to the rest of the track but i think its like this so everything doesnt go over the top. a great remix and with sum little adjusments it will be spot on mate, keep it up! 
