me and moolow (posted some track with moolow some days ago) are making a track togheter and i kinda liked the melodie we got so i changed some notes in it and added some other notes and such and made some hardtrance out of it

so everything is made by me... moolow made the melodie and i redid it

White sun vs moolow - AI (white sun remix)

so please download and comment on it.. i know that there might be to much reeverb in it.. but i kinda like it.. give's it some kindof "live" feeling, + when i took away some from it, it kinda losed some power.. so i have keept it

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I really like it! Just my style

The piano is great.
I don't like the lead -- it's just not "bright" enough.
You should make the build-up longer, where the lead gradually comes out.

Now, about the melody: You have 2 parts there (the first 4 measures, the second 4 measures). The 1st part sounds great. The 2nd part has some drawn-out long chord that doesn't sound right (so you only have 3 chords there instead of 4). IMO you should add another chord there. Hope that makes sense

Good work I certainly appreciate it.

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Originally posted by Eugene I really like it! Just my style The piano is great. I don't like the lead -- it's just not "bright" enough. You should make the build-up longer, where the lead gradually comes out. Now, about the melody: You have 2 parts there (the first 4 measures, the second 4 measures). The 1st part sounds great. The 2nd part has some drawn-out long chord that doesn't sound right (so you only have 3 chords there instead of 4). IMO you should add another chord there. Hope that makes sense Good work I certainly appreciate it.

thank's... thought you would like it

i thought about making it brighter, but i never did.. kinda liked it that "dark".

the build up.. yeah...first i didn't have the buildup.. the track started where the piano come's in with the "BOOM"..
but then i added the intro last night kinda quick.. just wanted something short, but maybe i should make it longer then.. i'll wait to hear some more comments first

btw... like your new chick in the avatar better

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Originally posted by dbl btw... like your new chick in the avatar better

yep. It's time for something new

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some great intro fx. i like everything in this track...except the lead. sad to say... i looove the piano. nice work man. arggg. sorry i just had to throw that in.

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Originally posted by nic01445 some great intro fx. i like everything in this track...except the lead. sad to say... i looove the piano. nice work man. arggg. sorry i just had to throw that in.

thank's.. glad you like it.... hmm.... maybe i should put another melodie in it... have some other that is just waiting to be put in a new track

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hey mate

i'm perhaps gonna contradict the others by saying that i like the sound of the lead... but not the piano that much. gotta be me i think
you did a nice job on the drums, i like the power in it.

keep it up!
LW

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Originally posted by Lightworks hey mate i'm perhaps gonna contradict the others by saying that i like the sound of the lead... but not the piano that much. gotta be me i think you did a nice job on the drums, i like the power in it. keep it up! LW

hehehe.. thank's buddy
i like the lead 2
kinda like the piano 2 even thou i think that it could have been better... kinda simple so i get you

thank's.. like the drums myself 2

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i like the lead as well
the bassline is too bassy on my radio which takes away the clearness of the track. i dont seem to have this problem with headphones. sounds a lot clearer then! maybe cut out some of the very low freq or something
other then this i like it a lot!

john

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Originally posted by John i like the lead as well the bassline is too bassy on my radio which takes away the clearness of the track. i dont seem to have this problem with headphones. sounds a lot clearer then! maybe cut out some of the very low freq or something other then this i like it a lot! john

thank's John
the track is made with headphones.... haven't been home alone to much lately so i can use my stereo speakers so that's probably why :/

glad you like it

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the remix itself is very nice
i like the lead and the melody, but the whole track sounds very "low" it neets a lot more highs 2 make it sound clearer.
also, the bassline is pretty simple imo, and therefore pretty annoying aswell.
the rest is pretty good, uve used some nice sounds which i like

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Originally posted by mantisnl the remix itself is very nice i like the lead and the melody, but the whole track sounds very "low" it neets a lot more highs 2 make it sound clearer. also, the bassline is pretty simple imo, and therefore pretty annoying aswell. the rest is pretty good, uve used some nice sounds which i like

thank's mantis
more high's... have taken that into my new track

glad you like it

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