http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=475004

150 bpm... hardish trance... =oP

feedback... PLEASE!!!!!!!

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Top 10 Tracks ATM;
Fractured - Between The Lines
Headscan - Lolife
Aesthetic Perfection - Pale
Fractured - Try To Forget
Antichristus - James Addiction (Remix)
Distimia - Vile
Re-Agent - Brain Death (Fractured Remix)
PreEmptive Strike 0.1 - Symbiosis Denied
Lastboss - Parralax Scrolling
Grendel - Judged Ones (Fractured Remix)

cant really make out stuff as i can only run lofi but it seems like a good tune to me, liking the phatt lead btw thatz great. keep it up!

tezz

I think the strings and the piano are a nice combination
but i think the piano would sound better if it sounded more realistic... sounds too much like a synthesizer

The lead adds a nice touch to the track

the percussion could be added some beef to it IMO

the only downer for me to this track was the kick and the bass which had sorta an uuummmphh feeling instead of an oommmmphh feeling which can really drive your track... try not to cut out all the treble out of the bass and kick as it won't give them that extra sting


my 2 cents

thank you for the comments... i put the tone of the bass drum up... and uped the freq n tweaked the eq of the bass... took out tha intro synth that was kind of cluttering up the song around 5:16... made the piano less synth like... still doesn't sound real though... i dunno how real i can make it sound with reason 1... =o/
i also put the volume of the bass down a tad...

guess i should say thank you kewlness... i've never had anyone actually pick out sounds and say 'it needs this' --- it helps A LOT! =oP

oh... i also kept the acidy synth going at the end with the bass so that they both ended at the same time... and had a little cymbyl build with a bass drum hit on 1 so that it just didn't... end... and also... took out that very last pad note that kinda sounded wierd... jus went for 1 count... but it sorta... made it sound funny...

i haven't uploaded tha new version yet... but i will tomorrow when i get home...

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Top 10 Tracks ATM;
Fractured - Between The Lines
Headscan - Lolife
Aesthetic Perfection - Pale
Fractured - Try To Forget
Antichristus - James Addiction (Remix)
Distimia - Vile
Re-Agent - Brain Death (Fractured Remix)
PreEmptive Strike 0.1 - Symbiosis Denied
Lastboss - Parralax Scrolling
Grendel - Judged Ones (Fractured Remix)

alright... i uped tha new version... you can dl it with this url...

right click n save target as... =oP


**EDIT**
shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit lol... i put up tha wrong song link... =o/ herez tha real one... sorry bout that... lol


dj cyde - without you

___________________
Top 10 Tracks ATM;
Fractured - Between The Lines
Headscan - Lolife
Aesthetic Perfection - Pale
Fractured - Try To Forget
Antichristus - James Addiction (Remix)
Distimia - Vile
Re-Agent - Brain Death (Fractured Remix)
PreEmptive Strike 0.1 - Symbiosis Denied
Lastboss - Parralax Scrolling
Grendel - Judged Ones (Fractured Remix)

Last edited by dj_unsorted on Jul-30-2003 at 06:38