i'll download it in the mornin justin and leave u sum feedback

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Not too fond of the bass. I think it could have a better groove to it, you know? The lead i think should be bigger sounding. Maybe layer some more saws on top of what you have. Really good use of effects and percussion! 8/10

this is nice mate

nic01445 was right about the bassline, IMO it needs a different synth noise on it (that patch has been used 9807597329843750984375097 times ) but other than that this is crackin work i still think u need to try and get more fx in there tho.. when that is done it will sound better

the production is getting better everytime u do a track.. keep it up and ull be producing pro stuff in no time

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its rather good, bass is rather crap tho lol. well the first bassline, if you drop it an octave and compress it with a lil delay or reverb it could be quite good. synth is well cool. you have come a long way very quickly justin, impressed

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Very Nice indeed !
nice construction and I love the percussion.
Personally I think the bass line is ok, just needs more compression.

1 Prob tho, try adding more layers to your lead synth to give it more power.

Great mix tho

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Cheers for all of the comments so far very encouraging

i fully take on board what you are all saying about layering the synth a little, i'll give it a go - but my computer just isn't fast enough to hear all the changes in real time, i have to add effects etc, then render the track to hear the difference - when i get a better PC i'll be able to make more intricate or layered effects on the leads - same thing with bassline too - if i added any more effects to the bass (yes it's already reverbed and delayed) i fear my PC might just jump off my desk and die

Luke>> i'll lower the offbeat bassline an octave and see if i like that better - although i reckon it might start getting into the sub frequencies and will be lost in the mix.


*update*

I've added an extra layer of lead synths - raised 1 octave to widen the sound, also sorted out some minor probs i had with the filtering. I added stra delay on some of the single drum hits i had, and also compressed and lowered the offbeat bass, and i've extended the intro by 8 bars.

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Last edited by JMF [TrAcId] on Jun-01-2003 at 11:34

not bad i suppose

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*listening to updated version*

I think you should take the reverb on the bass down a bit. Still, the only thing that seems lacking is the lead. I'm really diggin that kinda amp-feedback-ish sound that you have playin with the lead. 8/10

I really like it

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link isn't working and i was looking forward to hearing it...

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