ps: nice avatar you´ve got, is it a girl from israel ???
no thats 'niki nova', a porn star. you can found that avatar at TA's pack in your user profile.
sorry mate this tune is too hard for my soft ears
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Aug-07-2003 10:36
Shahar
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Registered: Jun 2002
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נו מה הוא חתם פה קבע
i'll respond later
Aug-07-2003 11:32
HyPeRSoNiC
Has Posted Here
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Yavne, Israel
quote:
Originally posted by Shahar
נו מה הוא חתם פה קבע
i'll respond later
אחי
אף אחד לא מכריח אותך להגיב, להוריד את הטראק, או אפילו להתייחס......
אני אישית ממש לא מבין את הבעיה שהוא מפרסם טראקים שלו פה....
ואם יש לך כל כך בעיה איתו - לפחות תגיד לו את זה בפנים כי לנצל את העובדה שאתה יודע שפה שהוא לא כדי ללכלך עליו מאחורי הגב, ועוד בטרד שלו שהורואה את התגובה ולא יודע שיורדים עליו, זה כבר לרדת ממש נמוך
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Aug-07-2003 16:12
deluxe
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Herzliya, Israel
Ok... here's my opinion...
i find the bass not low enough... u should add more low frequencies to it... try a bass boosting plug-in like the exellent Waves Rbass...
The synth line is too usuall... there are about 1,000,000 tracks that sound the same... i think it would be better for you to try to innovate instead and not immitate.. i'm not saying u have to change it, but work it more a bit...
phasers... Flangers... and stereo effects can add a lot if they will be wisely used...
about your sound, the mixing is good the everything is pumpy and clear but basicly i thing you need to give more excitement to your sound... make it more alive...
about the melody and the composing... i dont have much to add on that subject since i am not a fan of this genre so i dont want to critisize something i'm not very fimiliar with... maybe it's the genre's style... i dont know...
anyway... nice work
try to reach better than this!!! by your sound and production i think u can...
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Aug-08-2003 13:52
mckey_21
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2002
Location: Germany, Southwest
many thanx for your feedback i will try to improve my tracks in the future