nice work

sounds good
but the ending hmm?

you've gotta finish this dude...really cool remix...love that break...

remastered, fixed and a bit extended:

http://oehoe18.mine.nu/~deekay/connectedv5m.mp3

and again..remastered: http://oehoe18.mine.nu/~deekay/connectedv6m.mp3

the loud bass is fixed cant wait to finish it too bad I got other stuff to do right now

sounds very cool dude .. nice work make this a higher priority to finish.

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I have just two suggestions (based on your most recent version):

1) Something slightly different has to be done with that nifty two-phase buildup thing around 2:00. I like the concept, but something about it, particularly the first "peak" strikes me as amateur-sounding.

2) In the track over all, but especially right after that breakdown you need wider, cleaner, heavier bass. The melodic work sounds fine, but would be greatly enhanced in my opinion by a stronger (or maybe different?) bassline, with a deeper sound than what you have right now. The current bass also seems off-key somehow. I would avoid fooling with those bass key shifts too much, as my ear finds them mostly annoying, but that's just me.

But the breaks part is very nice.

Good work.

Nice.......I love the breaks part also

sounds great so far expect the ending is a bit wierd

You have to finish this soon.........looking forward to it