Alright, i did this last night. A bit of melodic trance. im just looking for a bit of feedback really so please have a listen and let me know what u think.

http://www.lostparadox.co.uk/rev.mp3

right click 'Save Target As...' u know the drill.

P.S. Go easy. Im still learning

P.P.S. Play it loud for best effect.

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u know, I like this tune very much, beginning is great and overall the track is nicely done.

I can't really find anything that I don't like about it. Great work!

I like this!

Great melody, and the bass and lead are CRISPY!

I think the kick, although it has punch, sounds 'dulled', in need of some sharpening - hope that makes sense!

overall some fine work! keep it up

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the melody is definitly a rip off of some aolready fa mous track maybe atrc or sumtin

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5. Armin Van Buuren - Shivers (Christian Webber Mix)

Good stuff here all around. Can't say I recognize the melody (as mentioned by prev), but I do like it.

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sorry mate. its no rip off. ill take it as a compliment tho

thanks for ur responses people. i was going to leave it but seeming as u people like it i think ill spend some more time on it, adding stabs, effects etc. ill also have a play wiv the kick.

Thnx again people!

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Originally posted by >everest< sorry mate. its no rip off. ill take it as a compliment tho thanks for ur responses people. i was going to leave it but seeming as u people like it i think ill spend some more time on it, adding stabs, effects etc. ill also have a play wiv the kick. Thnx again people!

let me know when u post the new version, I like this tune very much.

PM me please, thank you!