havent really been producing that much, 2 or 3 months on and off(very off). i think this is the first time i have done a good combination of bassline, melody and pads in a song, its pretty short only 1:25, but just check it out and leave me some feedback. thanks =)

http://67.82.25.80:2003/hadi/hadi%20-%20untitled.mp3

hey, hadi is a good friend of mine.. show him some love in here!

Buddy your improving everytime i hear something from you.. keep working on it and youll see it develop infront of you and then it will be all good!

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Hadi -

I know this is just a sample but the intro is too long and very weak, The melody however is nice. Needs more energy (unless you are going for that comedown feel).Keep working on it. The snares @ 00:57 sound like it's going to break into New Order - Blue Monday.

Hadi! What's up man?!?! Long time no chat! You are getting better everytime I hear your stuff! I always enjoyed critiqing your music! Always!


By the way - the intro is a bit weak - the kicks need more 'punch' and raise that 'bass' a little. D00d, your getting better, and better. In time, you will have a sick sound. Keep working.

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ok...

the hi-hats in the beginning need to go IMHO... i just think it doesn't serve to much of a purpose as an intro... just start the song at the 7 second mark....

I think the hi-hats and the snare and claps are a bit too loud... The mid-range to high-range is pretty loud but the low end needs some more to it

sorry for only criticisms but it was just an intro so I couldn't think of too many things to say...


cheers