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Cool beginning.. goes with your memories of the beach you were talking about.. great bass and pads in there... I definitly agree with the percussion thing though, you had a cool idea going with a DnB sort of feel but it needs a little bit of altering and compression in there. Also, be careful of disortion... distortion kills any track no matter how good it is and there is quite a bit in there (you might not hear it, but if there wasn't any distortion you would definitly notice a huge change in clarity) Other wise, good job with the synths in there, sounds really cool.
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