Have a listen see what you think, and if you got time could you please review it

Link : http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=308483&T=8600

Thankx very much.

TriXed

If its going to be hard trance, you're going to have to change that kick. It just sounds like a bass drum. I like acid so the 303 section was my favourite part of the track. Other than that, you have a fair bit of work to do on your sounds. Maybe put a little delay, or more amp release on the main lead, and some reverb. I sounds a little cheesy at the moment.

There's a while to go but it seems like you're headed in the right direction.

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Hate to be a critic, but that hook sounds really cheesy and the beat isn't really strong enough. You want to change the voice on the hook and get a proper bassline on there. Great sample though.

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yeah i dont like the kick but i cant find a better one.. and what do you mean by amp release?

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