absolutely fucking amazing
the vocal is mad, if a bit long
but i like, a lot

I only like the beginning (the 1st 2 minutes), then I think it gets too acidic and I hate the vocals totally.

lol - talk about both sides of the coin

i knew that the dialogue would be a love it or hate it affair - i reckon that those who know what it is will like it that little bit more, not sure whether to shorten it though, cos it fits the section perfectly - but on the other hand, it's 90 seconds long - so i dunno.

anyone else up for something a little out of the ordinary?? take a chance

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Originally posted by AZCA I only like the beginning (the 1st 2 minutes), then I think it gets too acidic and I hate the vocals totally.

you like nu nrg
no score

Fantastic work once again. I'm curious, how have you got this good in such a short time?

I've enjoyed everything you've posted so far, and i've been at it longer than you, yet you pwn me production wise

Nice production here, nice electro feel to it, wicked fx as well. I'm slightly in favour of canning the vocals, they don't really fit imo

The piano is wicked as well, really fits in. That high pitched clicky sort of synth that you seem to use in all your tracks is ok, electro-ish , but it can get a tad annoying at times.

Anyhow, overall, it's another fantastic song; really original. Top stuff

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Originally posted by Az you like nu nrg no score

I like them AND this. Score to me

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wow arctic - unexpected praise as for me getting so good in such a short space of time - i still feel i have a loooooong way to go - but i practice all the time, and listen to a LOT of music - so thats bound to have some positive effect i'm sure

i'm thinking of making an instrumental version or maybe finding a different shorter dialogue - i'm unsure at the moment, i'll wait until a few other people comment on it - i like it with and without the vocal to be honest

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Originally posted by JMF [TrAcId] wow arctic - unexpected praise as for me getting so good in such a short space of time - i still feel i have a loooooong way to go - but i practice all the time, and listen to a LOT of music - so thats bound to have some positive effect i'm sure i'm thinking of making an instrumental version or maybe finding a different shorter dialogue - i'm unsure at the moment, i'll wait until a few other people comment on it - i like it with and without the vocal to be honest

The vocals in first day fit really well, but i just don't know about these ones.

As for the first paragraph, so do i, but apparently it hasn't helped me much

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Originally posted by arctic The vocals in first day fit really well, but i just don't know about these ones.

you see with First Day, i built the track around the vocal - with this one i tacked the dialogue on at the end, after the composition was done, i think this was my mistake lol - instrumental version here we come

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i think alan played me this last night actually.. sounded nice but i was well stoned at the time.. ill dl it

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Percussion sounds a little flat. I guess i could get used to the bass, but it just sounds a little too filtered almost takes attention away from other things. Electro sounds in the buildup are more annoying than atmospheric. I like melody, but i think its level could come up a bit or maybe bring them out with more mastering. Obviously i could live without the vocal, but its not that bad, doesnt really fit with the track however, would be nice if they said something that kind of set the track off into breakdown. Also if you are gonna stick with the vocal it should be brought out of the mess a little so you can actually pay some attention to it, like PQM-You are sleeping.

Other than those things i think this is good work, just needs some levels adjusted, the percussion changed around a little, and some good mastering. Gives off a good progressive feeling, but doesn't really delve into trance in my opinion. And i think i get what you mean by 'strung-out' mix i can sort of feel the tension!

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Thanks for the reply danieldavid, however a few things i don't agree with on, mostly about the vocal - i think it fits with the track more each time i listen to - and the majority of people who have listened agree, so the people not liking the vocals is in the minority, also about bringing them out a little more like in PQM - the vocal in mine is more clear than those in You Are Sleeping, those might be quite loud in the mix - but are pretty hard to understand.

i might add to the strung out feeling of the dialogue by messing around with it more though, adding some distorted passages and extra delay in some parts.

I'm not sure what you meant by the percussion sounding flat though, would you be able to expand on that for me.

and finally - you do realise it was supposed to be an electro techno track, not Trance in anyway

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