i made this new song and just wanted to know what u guys/girls think about it (some feedback)?

the link:
http://dj-gingi.artists.mpfspromoti...llel_Worlds.mp3


thanx in advance

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Hey man ,this has some potential. I really like the atmosphere that it creates. There's a nice use of instruments and they all work well with eachother.

My only real suggestion is that you clear it up a bit. Maybe some eq could do the trick, but all the tracks kind of merged together to form one sound, rather than being able to hear each sound individually, if that makes sense.

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Hello!

I think this is a good track you have here. Percs are pretty damn sweet! I think one of those chords has a note out or something though, unless it is meant to sound like this of course?

Good track though. I will take it home and listen to it some more...

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thanx the comments guys, keep em coming

and hey cheggy, the problem is that i dont know how to master therefore i dont know how to make u hear all the sounds very well seperatly, the only mastering i know is through soundforge-->wavhammer and then go to my computer dj program and raise the treble and stuff and record it

if someone could help me in mastering that would be great

i use reason 2.5
thanx

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Dude, don't use the wave hammer. The wave hammer is a maximiser. Its a form of compression that boosts the thickness of the sound. It can work at making things louder, but it alters the waveform and starts joing sounds together. Its fine for percussion and bass, but for melodies, it can ruin stuff. I'm too good on eq either, so maybe go to the producers forums and have a look through the mastering thread

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thanx for the info cheggy
i didnt know that

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In Search Of Sunrise
Cool Breeze

dude, im lovvin this as i sed on msn, only gripe is the mastering as the others have said, ur perc is very professional
if u carry on like this then i would say big things are gonna happen!
well done mate!