hey i m 20 years old guy making trance. feedback needed. Here is clip of my tune http://www.zone.ee/hehehwhsx/preversion.mp3

Last edited by cipher on Oct-11-2003 at 18:35

Nice bassline, sounds pretty cool. The percussion you use is pretty average. That 4/4 hat is really bad sounding (or is it just the compression rate). Nice vocals, but the melody is a bit boring. Cool sounding breakdown. After that, I can't really hear it that clearly.

You should try uploading it at a higher compresion rate. At 56K, you might as well have it in .rm

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it s now available @ 96Kbps

Nice bassline.. beginning is a little slow and precussion is a little bit boring.. good use of vocals, all though build up to it is weak.. overall the song is a little bit to repetative and weak for my taste.. but you have some nice vocals and synths in there none-the-less.

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I know i have to make better buildup and percussion but thx for the feedback,