as im currently working on a communication remix myself, i couldn't resist a listen...
heres a few constructive criticisms for you =) :
* the main riff is definitely outta tune, needs tweaking. It also needs some boosting, its a bit too flimsy.
* IMHO it would sound better if the main riff came in after the first breakdown, rather than having a half climax, breakdown then climax.
Sorry, can't be bothered downloading the chill out version =P so can't offer any advice there, looks like the other posters like it tho, good stuff
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