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Oct-28-2003 17:48
sym
Time for Revolution
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: NYC
Downloading now, will let you know what I think.
Oct-29-2003 00:18
sym
Time for Revolution
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: NYC
Pretty decent for a first effort. It sounds very dull and lacks anything really filling. You need a bassline and work on the lead. If reworked I think it could be a nice tune.
Oct-29-2003 00:31
Abject Silver
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Ottawa, Canada
thanks for giving it a shot.
yeah, i agree that it's empty. leads are something i haven't gotten near yet, unfortunately.
that'll be in my second try
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Oct-29-2003 17:45
hey cheggy
like a tiger
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Sydney, Australia
Try and find some better percussion samples. The kicks in reason are pretty average from memory. Either find some on the web, or sample them yourself.
For a first attempt, its not too bad at all. Its very simple, yes, but you've got the right idea.
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