i like this when it started it reminde dmf of dj scot project or sumntin of the likes but then it got a lot more housey and melodic an ditneresting. i think u should try to fix that synth bass maybe eq it so it is defined lowly and not so abrupt in the mix. nice vocals too. just work at eq and compression a littlemore...the rest is great

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Thanks mate. Mastering occurred after I posted it, but it took a week to clear for upload, so i couldn't be bothered to upload it again.

Anyone else. Would love some more feedback.

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

well mate i like this

only problem i can see is in the track structure, i think it needs slightly more variation to it but apart from that its fine!

i really like the intro to this, sounds really good

i especially love the drrrrrr part, sounds like some EQed bongos or something to me but it sounds great, fits really well!

the percussion etc is nice!

i also like the speech part that comes in, something different from the usual tracks you hear!

i think this could also work really well as a chilled track with that spoken part!

good stuff

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

cheers man. I what you mean about it needing variation. I was hoping the vocals would be enough but obviously not. Any suggestions?

Yeah, its supposed to be a relaxing tune. Kind of groovey but not head banging.

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TNH im not really sure how it could add variation, maybe add a secondary bassline or some lower perc or pads add some parts

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08/01/16

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