I'm working on my first new song and i need your say on it,what do i need to make it sound better, and what i need to put in it can you let me no.

that didn`t work , I hope this does

it's a bit hard to judge as it's only a small part. There are only a bass line, a beat and a string, so some voices have surely to be added. Maybe with some more building up, you can work towards a break-open. Anyway, with this small part, you can go out lots of ways. So, I would say, just continue working on it and repost it later and then we can judge again Succes with it.

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Originally posted by Gloomy it's a bit hard to judge as it's only a small part. There are only a bass line, a beat and a string, so some voices have surely to be added. Maybe with some more building up, you can work towards a break-open. Anyway, with this small part, you can go out lots of ways. So, I would say, just continue working on it and repost it later and then we can judge again Succes with it.

Thank's for that,I will try to do some work on this week if dad will let me us the computer.because it the company computer he just let me instill just that progam.