Hello

Well, lately, trying to work with reason, thanks to a friend damien, he teached me a few things, but also thanks to mr mystery,luke,mk-s

anyway i was bored of CS, and opened reason, was playing with the midi files i have and with the Illuminate midi, i thought i could make something..

So here it is my attempt


of cource am not one of the major producers here, though i would like some comments

thanks

NEW LINK:
http://www.vinylcase.com/tunes/remix.mp3
(save target)

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Last edited by Massive84 on Nov-13-2003 at 20:02

Uhm, changed 2 things

its now 192kb.(10mb) and extended the melody with 8 more bars.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

It seems that my stupid ISP, has a dayly datalimiet..so yesterday suddenly you couldn't download it anymore

now its back again, if anyone could help me host this would appriceate it

anyway anyone nice enough to make a comment lol?

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

ok grabbing it now...

you realise..if you have experienced the original you will know u have very very large shoes to fill here! i'll check back as im a huge fan of this tune

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Originally posted by novastorm ok grabbing it now... you realise..if you have experienced the original you will know u have very very large shoes to fill here! i'll check back as im a huge fan of this tune

hehe well, it's not as good as the orignal, i just wanted my own little Illuminate

was also seeing if i improofed in any way in producing, my earlier stuff that i posted here, wasn't that good.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

You pretty much know my opinion already.

Definitely signs of you improving skills, good work.

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Originally posted by MK-S You pretty much know my opinion already. Definitely signs of you improving skills, good work.

cheers mate , learned alot from you.

btw, stupid ISP says wait till tomrrow, guess the data limiet is used for today

wish i still had my friends FTP lol >.<

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

i'm at school right now so i can't listen... If you need some help with hosting, I have about 25 mb of freespace from my universitie's account so i could help you out with that a bit if you need... just pm me with info and nekked pix (j/k)

nekked pics cost you 10 dollars, and thanks for the offer , i just asked a friend in msn, to upload it for me, so will post the new link soon

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

ok ive taken a listen now (plus had sleep which feels better)

i wont bother saying its not better than the original cos u already know that :P the main thing with this track is it sounds a little empty but theres some sounds in there with alot of potential to be beefed up a little. the bassline needs to be filled out to make the track flow along better i think and to give the track stronger undertones overall. main lead has a nice sound to it but unfortunately theres just no big kick when it comes in it needs more oopmh behind it .. like the original does

plus this is proly easily fixed with some mastering but the volume fluctuates all throughout the track, for example whereever the beat drops out for a little while the rest of the track gets much louder and then equalises out again when the beat returns

you gota a very promising sound tho! tough track to remix especially if everyone's heard the massive original (real nice work btw MK-S u are god u know that? ) but keep it up mate!

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Originally posted by novastorm ok ive taken a listen now (plus had sleep which feels better) i wont bother saying its not better than the original cos u already know that :P the main thing with this track is it sounds a little empty but theres some sounds in there with alot of potential to be beefed up a little. the bassline needs to be filled out to make the track flow along better i think and to give the track stronger undertones overall. main lead has a nice sound to it but unfortunately theres just no big kick when it comes in it needs more oopmh behind it .. like the original does plus this is proly easily fixed with some mastering but the volume fluctuates all throughout the track, for example whereever the beat drops out for a little while the rest of the track gets much louder and then equalises out again when the beat returns you gota a very promising sound tho! tough track to remix especially if everyone's heard the massive original (real nice work btw MK-S u are god u know that? ) but keep it up mate!

thanks for the comment mate..

Though this is my first project in reason, i still learning the art of substractor and malstorm, i also find reason real hard, because when you make something in it, and render it sounds a bit diffrint.

about the climax, i know it doens't have the bang, but i didn't wanne mess with the break alot, since i ALWAYS got stuck there, and quit a project :P.

For the baseline, i don't know it has 2 base sounds, layerd, i thought it would do, so if you got any tips would be nice

About the mastering thing, this is not mastered, i have no idea how to master a track, i try to EQ it as much as possible in reason, to make it sound clear, but i guess thats not enough.

thanks for the review.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Hey, I liked this. A more relaxed version of the original. Still sounds like it do with bigger builds. But, I enjoyed this a lot!

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