Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Somewhere where it's raining
Aural Eclipse - Air Ride
New track, done mostly by myself with a little contribution from Mr Terry too. Aint completely finished which is why i need some comments on how to finish the track. So all criticism is welcome
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Finally in GREECE!! DTA#3
its not bad actually!! it does get repetative in some parts! i think u could fix it up to be alot better!great melody though i really enjoyed that! and i would tell u about synths and kicks and stuff but i dont know much! overall though its really good!
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Nov-21-2003 21:56
hey cheggy
like a tiger
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Sydney, Australia
I think the biggest room for improvement is the lead synth. Too simple for me.
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Nov-22-2003 02:26
allstar
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Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Québeccity,Québec,Canada
Pretty good attempt here Mike, I liked the intro...
Gets a tad repetitive in places but clear evidence of some nice ideas overall. Good work.
Nov-22-2003 22:56
DRM
I Choose Noise
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Somewhere where it's raining
thanx for the comments guys n gal. i think it gets repepative as its 9mins long and only really has one major break, which seems to be a problem i have a lot, so best i sort that out.
cheggy : which lead do you think is too simple as there are about 7 synths at once when it kicks in!
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
its not a case of what u think mike, u just need to thicken the lead, and to do that u need not 2 use a preset
make your own rather beefy synth and add shitloads of eq + stuff till it fills the sound. for example, naked angel is a fairly simple track, but all the sounds are thick and well defined at the same time and it sounds good, this sounds a bit separated in comparison.
you know how to improve it, i but u just can't be arsed
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Somewhere where it's raining
quote:
Originally posted by Luke Terry
you know how to improve it, i but u just can't be arsed
ykts, i really couldnt be arsed makin a decent lead. but to br fair out of the 7 synths making the lead only 2 were presents and the other 5 werent. but yes to be fair i am a lazy producer!
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
quote:
Originally posted by DJRavemonkey
ykts, i really couldnt be arsed makin a decent lead. but to br fair out of the 7 synths making the lead only 2 were presents and the other 5 werent. but yes to be fair i am a lazy producer!
ive spent all week on an intro that lasts 30 seconds atm heh, chris is the laziest of them all tho
Aural Eclipse - Air Ride
