Good percussion and mastering.. love the piano chords - except that the piano sounds a little fake.. over all very good.. near pro quality stuff man!

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The vocal needs to be louder

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www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i was looking at clit vibrators, but i dont think she would be happy with that! (0-0) The D is the same as last year...great... says: anything thats vibrating a lass's clit, they are most likely gonna like it... www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i just think if ur guna get someone a dildo, it should look mean and impressive

it does sound a bit bare like mr o'calla. melody is nice and chilling, yet driving at the same time. im not a fan of the vocals sorry, they need to be louder, and up an octave, some of it is slighly off key too. at the main break, where there is only piano and a wee synth, get a drone in there, more hands in the air than just random dotted piano notes and the high string that comes in.

just my opinion tho, im sure u can make it a minter

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Vocals need to be louder, but fuck me m8, mastering is excellent! Fantastic breakdown with a nice piano, vocals sit in well, but are still too low in volume

Not too sure on the lead filtering in, sounds like you havw the cut off starting too low, sounds too stuttery if you get me? Brilliant main tune, relaxing!

Great track m8, absolutely brilliant, best i've heard from you so far!

Is this reason 2.5?

And one more question,

Any chance of a Chris Shepherd/Emota remix? .....PM me!

Shep

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www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i was looking at clit vibrators, but i dont think she would be happy with that! (0-0) The D is the same as last year...great... says: anything thats vibrating a lass's clit, they are most likely gonna like it... www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i just think if ur guna get someone a dildo, it should look mean and impressive

sweet track mate

like the others have said, the vocal is a little on the low side and the piano breakdown around the 5:45 mark sounds a little off -- like there there is too much dead air between each key

but overall the track was aces! nice buildup and slick mastering

good luck with your label submissions

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thanks for the replies guys, feedback as always is muchos appreciatas!

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love the piano chords - except that the piano sounds a little fake..

yeah i kinda agree-wasnt sure about it myself,i think ill change it for some pads in the final version!

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it does sound a bit bare like mr o'calla. melody is nice and chilling, yet driving at the same time. im not a fan of the vocals sorry, they need to be louder, and up an octave, some of it is slighly off key too. at the main break, where there is only piano and a wee synth, get a drone in there, more hands in the air than just random dotted piano notes and the high string that comes in.

cheers luke-yep the bare thing will be sorted(v2.0)see the prob wit the vocals were,its a soft vocal sung quietly-when i turned the volume up i got loads of clipping,so the actual singer of the vocals(cami)needs to sing the vocals more powerfully so i dont have to hike up the vox.also agreed with the slight moments of off keyness(cami)the piano doesnt seem to be working at all eh ill get workin on some pads!

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Any chance of a Chris Shepherd/Emota remix? .....PM me!

of course man! although maybe ill wait to see if there is some interest in the track before u start remixin...i might have a new project for u to remix

thanks again for comments lads!

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hey man, the track is great, but it sounds a lil weak here, but it could be my speakers and that all the bass is off here heh, anyway, keep up the work mate.

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Originally posted by JohnOC of course man! although maybe ill wait to see if there is some interest in the track before u start remixin...i might have a new project for u to remix

Oooooooooooo, okie dokie

But even there is no interest, i'd still love to give it a go.

Shep

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www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i was looking at clit vibrators, but i dont think she would be happy with that! (0-0) The D is the same as last year...great... says: anything thats vibrating a lass's clit, they are most likely gonna like it... www.mikefoyle.co.uk says: i just think if ur guna get someone a dildo, it should look mean and impressive

Well, it's good but it could do with some shaving, I think it's at least a minute too long.
Also, the vocals don't really sit very well on the mix.

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Actually, the percs sound a bit too simple too...

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Last edited by Mr.Mystery on Nov-25-2003 at 14:57

Hey jon

Ill have a listen when i get time, but id like to hear a vocal trance track from you. Im sure it will be mint!